The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The line graph compares

visitors

of the Caribbean

island

throughout a period from 2010 to 2017 on the basis of three groups.

Overall

, it can be seen that during

this

period the number of

visitors

soared in total. What stands out is that the number of people who stayed on the

island

overtook the number of

visitors

stayed

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who stayed

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on cruise ships in 2015. In 2010,

Caribbean

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the Caribbean

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was visited by 1

million

of

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visitors

, and those who travelled by cruise ships consisted less than 0.5

million

of

this

figure,

whereas

more than 0.5

million

of

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tourists stayed on the

island

. Despite initial

fluctuation

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the rate of people who came to

island

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the island

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through cruise ships dramatically increased to 2

million

in 2017. Between 2010 and 2011 the figures for passengers who stayed on the

island

was

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were

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steady

then

, increased to 1.5

million

and after two years, their numbers fell to a little under 1.5 but

it

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they

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fell back to 1.5 in 2017.

According to

the graph,

it is clear that

over these 7

years

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years,

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total

numbers

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number

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of

visitors

saw a dramatic rise to 3.5

million

.