The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph compares
visitors
of the Caribbean island
throughout a period from 2010 to 2017 on the basis of three groups.
Overall
, it can be seen that during this
period the number of visitors
soared in total. What stands out is that the number of people who stayed on the island
overtook the number of visitors
stayed
on cruise ships in 2015.
In 2010, Correct pronoun usage
who stayed
Caribbean
was visited by 1 Correct article usage
the Caribbean
million
of
Change preposition
apply
visitors
, and those who travelled by cruise ships consisted less than 0.5 million
of this
figure, whereas
more than 0.5 million
of
tourists stayed on the Change preposition
apply
island
.
Despite initial fluctuation
the rate of people who came to Add a comma
fluctuation,
island
through cruise ships dramatically increased to 2 Correct article usage
the island
million
in 2017. Between 2010 and 2011 the figures for passengers who stayed on the island
was
steady Correct subject-verb agreement
were
then
, increased to 1.5 million
and after two years, their numbers fell to a little under 1.5 but it
fell back to 1.5 in 2017. Correct pronoun usage
they
According to
the graph, it is clear that
over these 7 years
total Add a comma
years,
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
visitors
saw a dramatic rise to 3.5 million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, island, million with synonyms.
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