Politicians personal lives should not be written on newspapers. To what extend, do you agree or disagree?

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government

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officials

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need to expose their personal

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and some people think that should not to displayed in public media. I believe that

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politicians

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behaviour and activities should be

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.

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with, There amount of argument why

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official

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should be written

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newspapers.

first,

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politicians

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personal

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have been appearing on public media that can be received assessment by the general public. Because there is a common issue for the legislator to take advantage of their power in

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parliament. The citizens would give to evaluation

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on glamorous

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lives

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or not

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reflected

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crime

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such

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as

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for doing corruption and

violent

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so on.

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, the citizens who have

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saw

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the

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politicians

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can

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politicians

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still capable

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achievement and behavior for the next voting of

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.

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are displayed

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arrogant

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or another negative perspective of their personal

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for

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not

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that people again, because their not

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of

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the

desirable.

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, the

policitians

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politicians

have been

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negative

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review

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from all

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citizens. In conclusion,

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of

politicians

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live

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is a way to provide

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official

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for prevent bad behavior and

also

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assessment

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their impact

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the country.