the map shows developments, which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.
The map shows a comparison of bookstore developments from 2000 to and nowadays. Generally, they rearranged most of the
books
' placement and also
the facilities itself
. Correct pronoun usage
themselves
However
, there are several things that remained the same.
It is clear that
the fiction books
section from 2002 already changed into a
4 different sections of genres, which are art, hobbies, cookery and travel. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Then
on the right side, they renovated the fiction books
section into a non-fiction one. Moreover
, the current tables were used to be places for three types of book
. Fix the agreement mistake
books
Not to mention
, they also
replaced the non-fiction's
section Change noun form
non-fiction
into
a Cafe. But , there are three places that remained the same which are the travel Change preposition
with
books
, the latest books
, and the service desk. Not to mention
, the entrance still start
in the same place and direction.Change the verb form
starts
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, not to mention".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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