The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years.
The pie charts provide data about the devices individuals in the 18 to 25 age group
use
to watch Wrong verb form
used
television
in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
Overall
, in 2009 the conventional TV
was the most preferred device
for watching television
, however
, in 2019 mobile phone
and flat-screen Fix the agreement mistake
phones
TV
were the most preferred Fix the agreement mistake
TVs
device
for watching Fix the agreement mistake
devices
television
.
As can clearly be seen, in 2009 the conventional TV
was the most preferred device
for watching television
with 34 per cent
, whereas
tablet
was the least preferred Correct article usage
the tablet
device
for watching television
. The percentages of desktop computer
and Fix the agreement mistake
computers
laptop
were pretty similar accounting for 18 and 20 per Fix the agreement mistake
laptops
cent
respectively.
In 2019, mobile phone
and flat-screen Fix the agreement mistake
phones
TV
were the most preferred devices for watching television
at 27 and 26 per cent
respectively.
The percentage of tablet
was 19 per Fix the agreement mistake
tablets
cent
which was approximately four time
more than the proportion Change to a plural noun
times
was
in 2009 which was 5 per Unnecessary verb
apply
cent
. The percentages of desktop computer
and Fix the agreement mistake
computers
laptop
were the same accounting for 12 per Fix the agreement mistake
laptops
cent
respectively. The least preferred device
for watching television
in 2019 was conventional tv
with 4 per Correct your spelling
TV
cent
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words television, tv, device, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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