The bar charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
There are two bar charts, the first one shows the average reason for
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study
for students of different age groups. The second oneWrong verb form
studying
,
illustrates the support that they have received Remove the comma
apply
by
employers. Figures are given between under 26 and over 49 Change preposition
from
years
old.
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Overall
, the main reason for Linking Words
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study of
younger people is for Wrong verb form
studying
career
, Correct pronoun usage
their career
on the other hand
, older students prefer to Linking Words
study
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due to
interest. Young people are more supported by employers than the older.
Concerning students under 26 Linking Words
years
old, 80% Use synonyms
study
because of their career and only 10% are for interest. The career importance goes in descent as the Use synonyms
years
go by. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, the interest grows. Linking Words
For example
, the over 49 Linking Words
years
old community has 70% studying for pleasure, Use synonyms
while
almost 20% is to increase their progress.
The employer's support has as well an evolution. It starts up and Linking Words
then
goes down, Linking Words
however
, Linking Words
then
it goes up again. The youngest generation of Linking Words
this
graph, Linking Words
have
almost 65% of Correct subject-verb agreement
has
Correct article usage
the administration
administration
backing. The oldest one has around 45% of encouragementChange noun form
administration's
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Vocabulary: Replace the words study, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "goes down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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