The bar charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

The bar charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age 

groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
This
illustration compares the amount of help that receive students
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different ages and their main reasons for
study
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depending on the ages.
Overall
, it is evident that the oldest
age
group pursues education for personal
fulfillment
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,
while
the younger
age
groups
do so in order to
fulfill
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their professional goals.
Also
, the most support was given to the youngest
age
groups
. In the first three
age
groups
(under 26, 26-29, and 30-39), 80%, 70%, and nearly 60% of the population, respectively, have a strong propensity to study for their careers. Those between the ages of 40 and 49,
on the other hand
, studied half for their career prospects and half out of interest.
By contrast
, the oldest
age
group shows a different picture, with almost 70% of them learning for their own interest The two youngest
age
groups
had the most support, with the former receiving close to 70% and the latter 60%.
Additionally
, the support received by individuals in the 30-39 and 40-49
groups
was quite comparable, ranging from 30% to 40%. The oldest
age
group, on the other part, received little more assistance, just over 40%.
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