The graph below gives information from a 2018 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The graph below gives information from a 2018 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
This
line graph reflects the different types of
energy
consumed in the United States from 1980 to 2018 and projects their future
consumption
through 2030. From 1980 to 1995, petrol and oil
consumption
fluctuated between 30 and 35
billion
tonnes
, growing faster after 1995 to over 40
billion
tonnes
. By 2030, it's projected to reach nearly 50
billion
tonnes
. Coal use grew steadily from 1980 to 1990,
then
rapidly to 22
billion
tonnes
in 1995. It remained constant until 2005 and is projected to grow rapidly after 2018. Natural gas use was volatile between 15 and 20
billion
tonnes
from 1980 to 1995, peaking at nearly 25
billion
tonnes
after 1995. It's since ebbed and flowed without exceeding 25
billion
tonnes
and is predicted to remain stable. Renewable
energy
consumption
(nuclear, solar, wind, hydropower) has been modest, never exceeding 10
billion
tonnes
. Nuclear
energy
is the most used and follows a slow-growth trend,
while
hydroelectricity
consumption
has never exceeded 5
billion
tonnes
and shows a slow downward trend.
Overall
, non-renewable
energy
sources are consumed much more than renewable
energy
sources. Of these, oil and petrol are used much more than other
energy
sources.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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