The graph below gives information from a 2018 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

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consumed in the United States from 1980 to 2018 and projects their future

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through 2030. From 1980 to 1995, petrol and oil

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fluctuated between 30 and 35

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, growing faster after 1995 to over 40

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. By 2030, it's projected to reach nearly 50

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. Coal use grew steadily from 1980 to 1990,

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rapidly to 22

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in 1995. It remained constant until 2005 and is projected to grow rapidly after 2018. Natural gas use was volatile between 15 and 20

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from 1980 to 1995, peaking at nearly 25

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after 1995. It's since ebbed and flowed without exceeding 25

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and is predicted to remain stable. Renewable

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(nuclear, solar, wind, hydropower) has been modest, never exceeding 10

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. Nuclear

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is the most used and follows a slow-growth trend,

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hydroelectricity

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has never exceeded 5

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and shows a slow downward trend.

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, non-renewable

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sources are consumed much more than renewable

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sources. Of these, oil and petrol are used much more than other

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sources.

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Energy consumption
Renewable resources
Non-renewable resources
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Hydroelectric power
Solar energy
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The graph below gives information from a 2018 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

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