thw two pie charts show online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.
The following pie charts illustrate the cyberspace purchasing for commerce sectors in Canada in the 5-year period of time from 2005 and 2010.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the retail sectors to increase were video games and food and beverage, on the other hand
, electronics, appliance, and home furnishings decreased over the given period.
According to
the figure, video games accounted for just under a fifth to go up by 5 per cent
in 2010. Likewise
, food and beverage comprised 22 per cent
at first to climb considerably by exactly 10 per cent
in the end.
As for remaining, electronics and appliances made up just over a third which then
fell by a mere 5 per cent
in the last
year of the graph. Lastly
, home furnishings took up precisely a quarter in the beginning, and went down significantly by a tenth in the final year surveyed.Submitted by Zolboo on
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