The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
This
map depicts a comparison between two locations in Garlsdon where the new supermarket will be in one of them. It is clear from the graph both places S1 and S2 are active by population density and moving the cars.
According to
what is shown in area S1, it is located in the countryside in the north, where it is close to industries.
In addition
, it far 12
km
from Hindon which contains 10000 people. The
last
feature, the main road is in front of it. As for site S2, it is in the town centre in the south, where it is surrounded by factories from all sides,
also
it stays away 25
km
from Cransdon and 16
km
from Bransdon whose populations are 29000 and 15000 respectively.
Moreover
, the main road does not go across it.
To sum up
, we could say that each site is not near houses directly, but S1 is closer than S2 approximately 4
Km
.
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