Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In recent years,multiple challenges related to
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the environment
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environment
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the environment
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economy
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,
education
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,
population
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and many others have been witnessed all around the world. Some argue that underdeveloped countries like
Pakistan
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will be badly affected by these challenges and the situation in
Pakistan
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will get worse in the next ten years.
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many reasons.
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of the main reasons is
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the growing
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population
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of
Pakistan
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Pakistan
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is
one
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of the most populated countries in Asia with a
population
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of more than 50 million people.
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every individual is aware of social, political and economic unrest in the
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take
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any necessary steps to improve the situation. The poor economic infrastructure of the
state
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will be badly impacted by the growing prices of dollars in the world. Ever growing
population
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with
poor
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a poor
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economy
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has made
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the situation
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worse. The sector of
education
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is
also
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impacted badly by poor infrastructure. Poor and underprivileged people
canot
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can't
afford
education
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,which
further
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increases the widening gap between
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the rich
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and poor
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the
country
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.
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, the environmental issues are
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one
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of the
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reasons for
the devastation of the
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.
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, we can still be able to resolve the issues with hard work and persistence. Some effective methods like family planning and
population
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control strategies can help the
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to control
ever-increasing
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the ever-increasing
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population
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rate. Younger citizens of the
country
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can play a huge part in stabilizing the
economy
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of the
state
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by giving free
education
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to children and underprivileged areas. The issue of environmental pollution is a matter of concern
due to
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the increased use of cars, automobiles and private transport. We can combat
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problem by introducing cheaper prices for public transport. It is the public responsibility to make the environment clean by promoting
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of renewable energy In conclusion, I believe that proper planning must be taken by the government to ensure a better future for the
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. The residents of the
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must obey laws and regulations to improve the
economy
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of the
state
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. We can hope for a better future
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if we act as a responsible citizen and try to make the environment safe and secure for the upcoming generations.

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Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
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  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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