The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, ltaly and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph given illustrates average
carbon
dioxide
emissions per person in various Europe nations over a forty-year period from 1967 to 2007.
From an overall
perspective, it is evident that amount
of Correct article usage
the amount
carbon
dioxide
fumes on
each Change preposition
from
citizens
in the United Kingdom showed Change to a singular noun
citizen
an
downward trend, Change the article
a
whereas
a reverse pattern can be been
in the data on Italy and Portual over the years shown.
From the beginning of the period, the weight of Correct your spelling
seen
carbon
dioxide
compound counted on
Change preposition
by
person
in the UK was Add an article
the person
a person
highest
, at approximately 11 metric Correct article usage
the highest
tonnes
. The figures for Sweden and Italy were lower, at nearly 9 metric tonnes
and just over 4 metric tonnes
. Portugal, however
, accounted for the lowest number, at approximately 1 metric ton.
In the following years, after reached
a peak of over 10 metric Change the form of the verb
reaching
tonnes
in 1977, the number of carbon
dioxide
realesed
in Sweden underwent a significant fall to under 6 metric Correct your spelling
released
tonnes
in 2007, meanwhile
the data on the UK steadily fell to about 9 metric Add a comma
meanwhile,
tonnes
in the final year. The figure for Italy gradually increased to nearly 8 metric tonnes
in
the end of the period, Change the preposition
at
whereas
that of Portugal considerable
rose from over 6 metric Change the word
considerably
tonnes
to nearly 8 metric tonnes
between 1997 and 2007.Submitted by khoihoangtrong96 on
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