Some parents prefer to have their children receive home tuition, an alternative that traditional education teachers have always questioned. What are reasons to support home tuition?

Nowadays, many
parents
believe that
children
should be educated by
home
tuition but teachers of any academy or
school
do not agree with
this
thinking.
Parents
think that if
parents
send their
children
to a
school
or college could lead to
develop
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bad habits
in
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them
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. I completely prefer
home
tuition.
Firstly
,
parents
believe that
home
tuition is a good source of
education
and
make
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makes
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students
more capable of solving questions. Some
students
are different in nature because they can have a shy personality, so they feel comfortable studying at
home
rather than going to the
institute
. In 2020,
International
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the International
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Education
Board conducted
a
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exam between those
students
completing their
education
from a
school
, and
on the other
hand
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those who were educated at
home
. It was proved that
students
having
education
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at their
home
were more capable of solving problems than those who completed
education
from
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at
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a
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an
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institute
.
Secondly
,
parents
feel afraid of sending their
children
to a
school
or college because of the different rumors spreading at present like terrorism, bad habits among
children
, and bad company of friends. Once in 2015, an exam
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condusted
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conducted
in Germany, to read the minds of peers and it proved that those
children
who were thoughted at
home
were more obedient
then
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than
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those who were thoughted through a specific place. In conclusion, peers who study at
home
are
well
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better
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mannered than those studying
from
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at
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a
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an
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institute
. In my opinion, we should get our early
education
by studying at
home
and for higher
education
we can join the
institute
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