In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

There is an increasing number of

people

who

interested

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in excavating the

history

of the house or building

in

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where they live. I think

people

doing

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that because they have the cognitive to protect the historical value of the

buildings

and the sense of connection that

people

felt within the exploration. In order to research

the

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history

of

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them

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,

people

can gather the

knowledges

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and memories that elder citizens around them have and go to the libraries in their cities. Many

buildings

with great historical value had been destroyed because of the wars and

people

's ignorance in the past.

Therefore

, many

people

appeal for the protection of

buildings

. After

people

have the cognitive to appreciate the beauty of historical

building

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buildings

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,

people

willing to find out the

history

of the

buildings

in their own living places. What's more,

during

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the process of exploring the stories about the

buildings

in their cities

enhance

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the connection between them. Because the forms of

architectures

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architecture

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are special

due to

the unique elements a location has,

such

as weather and culture, these link everyone who

living in

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there and make them feel united. In order to know the

history

of the building

in

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where they live, one of my suggestions is to ask the elders who

also

live

in

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there. Because they have more experiences since the more time they have

been

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lived, they might have experienced the changes of the time of these architectures. Another suggestion is going to local libraries and

search

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for the information which had been recorded on

papers

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. In conclusion,

people

's increasing

interests

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of

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in

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excavating the

history

of

the

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architecture in the place they live

due

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to their

congnitive

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cognitive

of protection after the destruction of many

buildings

and the sense of connection

that is

given to explorers. My suggestions for explorers to reach

this

intention are asking the local elders for help and searching

information

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for information

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in local libraries.