The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line charts illustrate how the proportion of electrical
appliances
owning
families changed and the number of Verb problem
apply
time
a family spent doing housework
every week
in a single country between 1920 and 2019.
Overall
, the proportion of all three electrical appliances
experienced increase
. Add an article
an increase
However
, the hours of time
that housework
took from a family every week
kept dropping.
In 1920, the proportion of refrigerators was at the lowest position with almost 0%. Before 1960, all appliances
were increasing until a decrease occurred to
washing machines. During these four decades, the ownership of refrigerators significantly grew and surpassed the other two Change preposition
in
appliances
and continue
to Wrong verb form
continued
grew
till it reached 100% in 1980. In 2000, the ownership of vacuum cleaners Change the verb
grow
also
reached 100%. In the case of washing machines, after the drop in 1960, it went back to increased in 1980 and kept rising.
On the contrary
, the number of time
that a family spent doing housework
every week
went down during the time
of these years. In 1920, a family spent 50 hours to do
Change the verb form
doing
housework
every week
, the number of hours dropped rapidly to 15 in 1980, and remained the same in 2000 then
declined again in 2019.Submitted by ffff815 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words appliances, time, housework, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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