The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers.
The
given
bar chart illustrates the punctuality of the bus Verb problem
apply
company
with both actual and targeted services and the number of complaints
per thousand passenger journey between the years 1999 to 2003.
Overall
, the company
only achieved their target in 2003 in the span of half decade
, Correct article usage
a decade
although
its graph for complaints
is increasing continuously.
To begin
with, in 1999 business
achieved 85% of services arriving on time but their goal was 86% and they had Correct article usage
the business
complaints
of 70K passengers. On the other hand
, in 2000 they targeted the same 86% but they only reached 82% with the complaints
100K.
In the next two years 2001 and 2002 company
targeted 85% of services arriving on time but they Correct article usage
the company
fail
and only got 84.5 and 84% Wrong verb form
failed
while
in 2001 a
number of Correct article usage
the
complaints
was
81 and 105 per thousand passengers. Change the verb form
were
Lastly
in 2003 finally
the company
crossed their target of 84.5 % to 84.9% but the complaints
remained increasing and it reached 120 per thousand passengers journeys.Submitted by shubhashish.bobby on
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