Some Young People are leaving the countryside to live in towns and cities, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

Currently, most of the youth

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are moving from the

countryside

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to live in

cities

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and

towns

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,

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the elder

people

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are left behind in the

countryside

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.

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situation is happening because young

people

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are more eager to explore new

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and if they move they can easily find interesting

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in

cities

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to hang out rather than the

countryside

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. These problems can be solved by teaching or letting them know that they can do many

fun

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activities without leaving their current

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. Nowadays, some young

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have a huge interest in exploring new

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. Since their

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is already surrounded by the rapid growth of social media. They now become more familiar with

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that they have not visited yet.

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, there was a person who had been living in the

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since he was born, until he saw one of the videos on social media, about how amazing life is in metropolitan areas.

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, when he already managed his money, he chose to move out from his current house in the

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. So it can be said that some

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might be curious about living in a huge city,with lots of buildings.

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, the young

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can hardly find

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activities in the

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. Since in the

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there are not likely to be malls or amusement parks, like the the ones in the

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. Even though the

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is more peaceful than in the

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, young

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tend to like exciting crowded

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, like going to a party.

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, in the

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people

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rarely

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find a club that offers

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kind of event.

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why, young citizens prefer to live in the

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because they think it is more

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. In order to tackle these problems, the older

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can tell or teach the young

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that living in the

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is as

fun

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as living in

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. I believe the elder

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who live in the

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are more experienced and know many

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in the

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better than young

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. They can teach them that they can have

fun

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without moving to

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, like telling them to explore more in nature

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as beaches, lakes,

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and mountains

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. With

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action, young

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can reconsider their choices about moving out.

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, some of the young

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are leaving their current house which is the

countryside

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to live in

towns

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and

cities

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,

then

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the elderly

people

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are left behind in the

countryside

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.

This

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can be happening because young

people

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have a huge interest in exploring new

places

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and if they move they can easily find interesting

places

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in

cities

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to hang out rather than the

countryside

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. In order to solve these problems, it can be teaching or letting them know that they can do many

fun

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activities without leaving their current

places

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.