The graph shows the average carbondioxide emission per person in the United kingdom,Sweden, Italy,Portugal between 1997 and 2007.
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carbondioxide
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carbon dioxide
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of each person in the countries
of United
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the United
kingdom
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Kingdom
portugal
in the Change the capitalization
Portugal
year
1967 and 2007 respectively. I will explain the chart in the following paragraphs.
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a
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overall
increase in the country
Portugal and Italy.The Fix the agreement mistake
countries
emission
of carbondioxide
was increased in these two Correct your spelling
carbon dioxide
countries
compartively
.
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comparatively
To begin
, there are five countries
namely Italy, Sweden, Portugal ,United Kingdom. The average carbondioxide
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carbon dioxide
emission
for each person in the year
1967and
2007. In the Correct your spelling
1967 and
year
1967, the Portugal had incereased
from 1 metric tonne to 5 metric Correct your spelling
increased
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. There is
a rapid Wrong verb form
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an increase
the increase
emission
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carbon dioxide
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United
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the United
Kingdom
there was a Add a comma
Kingdom,
rapaid
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rapid
carbondioxide
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carbon dioxide
emossion
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emission
emissions
tonnes
to 7 metric tonnes
. Italy has a good development in the carbondioxide
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carbon dioxide
emission
, it has raised to 10metric tonnes
in the year
2007 . It was a good change among other
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the other
countries
. In Sweden,there was a sudden drop down
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of
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carbondioxide
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carbon dioxide
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emissions
emission
in the year
1997 and it was
slowly decreased to 5 metric Unnecessary verb
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tonnes
in the year
2007. It has a dramtic
decrease in the Correct your spelling
dramatic
carbondioxide
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carbon dioxide
emission
in the year
2007.Submitted by insighttribez on
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