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The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
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The bar chart provided data on the total
of
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minutes number of telephone calls that were divided into
three
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 categories, Local-fixed
line
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, National and international-fixed
line
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, and mobiles (all calls) from 1995 to 2002 in the UK.
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, the Local-fixed
line
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 predominated the highest number most of the time.
By contrast
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, the mobile (all calls) showed stable results in low quantities. As can be seen, a volatile result produced a local-fixed
line
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 figure, in the initial
three
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 years from 1995, 1996, and 1997 it slightly increased by 10
billion
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 each
year
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.
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, there is a small gap between 1998 and 1999 around two
billion
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.
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, only one
year
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 more it shows a continued declining trend of approximately 10
billion
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 every
year
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 for the
last
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three
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 years from 2000, 2001, and 2002.
On the other hand
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, compared with
three
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 other factors, a contrast chart showed
at
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mobile (all calls) results. It
generates
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 the lowest start growth number roughly at five
billion
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 in 1995.
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, for the rest of the
year
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 it prevailed consistently
steatdy
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steady
steadily
 until in 2002 it reached a peak of about 45
billion
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words three, line, billion, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number
  • minutes
  • telephone calls
  • UK
  • divided into
  • categories
  • from
  • to
  • overall
  • increased significantly
  • local fixed-line calls
  • accounted for
  • largest proportion
  • throughout
  • period
  • international calls
  • highest rate of growth
  • experiencing
  • sharp increase
  • national long-distance calls
  • remained relatively stable
  • slight decline
  • towards
  • end
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