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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart provided data on the total minutes number of telephone calls that were divided into
three
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 categories, Local-fixed
line
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, National and international-fixed
line
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, and mobiles (all calls) from 1995 to 2002 in the UK.
Overall
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, the Local-fixed
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 predominated the highest number most of the time.
By contrast
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, the mobile (all calls) showed stable results in low quantities. As can be seen, a volatile result produced a local-fixed
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 figure, in the initial
three
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 years from 1995, 1996, and 1997 it slightly increased by 10
billion
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 each
year
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.
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, there is a small gap between 1998 and 1999 around two
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.
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, only one
year
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 more it shows a continued declining trend of approximately 10
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 every
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 for the
last
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three
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 years from 2000, 2001, and 2002.
On the other hand
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, compared with
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 other factors, a contrast chart showed mobile (all calls) results. It generated the lowest start growth number roughly at five
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 in 1995.
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, for the rest of the
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 it prevailed consistently steady until in 2002 it reached a peak of about 45
billion
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