Some people think that robots are important for human`s future development. Other think that robots have negative impacts on society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Robots are important for future developments but
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life.
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automation in some aspects
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is a good innovation to make some
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devices, Precision engineering, Economic efficiency, Disruption, Workforce displacement, Ethical dilemmas, Regulation, Digital divide, Skill obsolescence, Social interaction
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Introduction
Ensure to give a clear introduction, presenting an overview of the topic, which outlines both viewpoints and gives a hint of your own opinion.
Supported Main Points
Develop your main points more thoroughly with specific examples and explanations.
Logical Structure
Organize your essay with clear paragraphs for the introduction, each viewpoint, and a conclusion. Use linking words to connect ideas.
Complete Response
Expand on your own opinion, providing clear reasons and examples to support it, ideally in a separate paragraph.
Clear Comprehensive Ideas
Aim for clarity in expressing your ideas; ensure that each paragraph has a central idea that is expanded upon.
Relevant Specific Examples
Use specific examples to illustrate your points about the impact of robots; try referencing real-world scenarios or studies.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Automation
  • Artificial intelligence
  • Innovation
  • Labor-saving devices
  • Precision engineering
  • Economic efficiency
  • Disruption
  • Workforce displacement
  • Ethical dilemmas
  • Regulation
  • Digital divide
  • Skill obsolescence
  • Social interaction
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