Task 1 The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The graph depicts the data about the proportion of the
population
in Asia including Use synonyms
Philippines
, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia lived between 1970 and 2020 with forecasts for Correct article usage
the Philippines
following
2 decades.
It is interesting to note Correct article usage
the following
the
that the number Correct article usage
apply
people
who are living in rural areas will rise in all included countries by 2040.
Change preposition
of people
Firstly
, in 1970 the people Linking Words
lived
in rural parts of Malaysia consisted Correct pronoun usage
who lived
30
% of Change preposition
of 30
Use synonyms
population
but after 5 decades it has increased Add an article
the population
over
70%, which will grow in the following years too. Change preposition
to over
Similarly
, people from Indonesia living in cities will grow rapidly starting from its lowest point (10%) Linking Words
showed
6 fold increase (60%) in 2020 and Wrong verb form
showing
positive
trend will continue in 2030 and 2040.
Correct article usage
a positive
Secondly
, Linking Words
Philippines
underwent several fluctuations throughout 50 years until 2020. After 2020 the percentage of city residents will be doubled up to 50%. The Correct article usage
the Philippines
population
in Thailand living in cities remained stable with minimal increases before 2020. In 2020 the Use synonyms
number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
population
in monopolies Use synonyms
expected
to grow by almost reaching half of the whole Add a missing verb
is expected
population
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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