This bar chart provides the information about International graduated students of Canadian universities by 2001 and 2006.

This bar chart provides the information about International graduated students of Canadian universities by 2001 and 2006.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for This bar chart provides the information about International graduated students of Canadian universities by 2001 and 2006.
The bar graph compares the percentage of international graduated pupils of Canadian Universities between 2001 and 2006. Looking from
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overall
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an overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that the
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of students fresh out from
colleges
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in Canada in 2006
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more than in 2001
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for Alberta University.
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with, in 2001, the majority
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of Canadian colleges
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5% or less of foreign
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alumni
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.
However
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, the graph shows
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New Brunswick, Nova Scotia, and Quebec Universities had more than 5% international pupils, at around 8%, 7%, and 6%, respectively. Among these, Ontario, Newfoundland and Labrador, and Manitoba
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the lowest
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of foreign students at around 3%. By 2006, there
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growth of international alumnus all over colleges in Canada, with significant growth was British Columbia at around 11% (a 175% increase) and New Brunswick at around 12% (a 50% increase). Nova Scotia
also
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displayed
notable
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growth of foreign learners to 11%.
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, Alberta University recorded
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a falling
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number
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of foreign students from 5% in 2001 to 4% in 2006.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • International graduates
  • Canadian universities
  • Degree levels
  • Bachelor's degree
  • Master's degree
  • Doctorate/PhD
  • Geographical distribution
  • Trends
  • Immigration policy
  • Tuition fees
  • Workforce
  • Fluctuations
  • Data comparison
  • Bar chart
  • Academic mobility
  • Partnership agreements
  • International education
  • Demographics
  • Economic impact
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