Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or not agree?

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is a common aspect

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integrated with someone's process to accomplish their intentions. Even though questioning

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might

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to enhance

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, I completely disagree with that view and

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both sides with my own arguments. A

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is only intended to strengthen the notion of

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potential. Generally, hearing a

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is designated to shower its listeners with positive affirmations, since they tend to doubt their ability and overthink about the accomplishment of their

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. Take an example from

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who are going to the

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tellers or

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readers just to ask their successful rates from doing particular activities. Most of them

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up

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good words like, '

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will have good grades' or '

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can pass the exams'.

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that is

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self-esteem,

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against the idea because hearing a

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only drives

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to their emotional safety with good affirmations, whilst their ends are still uncertain.

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,

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should rely on certain things that can aid them to achieve their

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. There are other aspects that must

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taken into account when someone

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to achieve their dreams.

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the strength of their

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. It is evident that the more

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recite particular

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over something they want, there is a likelihood that it becomes achievable for them

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since doing

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the most prominent condition when

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can directly communicate with their own God, The Creator of

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world.

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their persistent effort. Practice continuously is the key factor

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people

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who are aiming for their

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because they are likely to be well-prepared with various necessities.

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, they become tougher when facing any kind of tests or challenges,

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their aims will not be determined by

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of

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can boost individuals' self-esteem during

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process

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their

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.

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, I personally think that other factors,

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the strength of

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and persistent effort are more profound to be considered.