Task 2: Nowadays, more and more women decide to have children later in their life? why? Does the advantage or disadvantage?
In modernity, women prefer to have
children
when they feel more like adults and when they are explored and built a good economy. Although
making the decision to have children
in the early 20's is not the end of the world, I believe the drawbacks outweigh the advantages, because it is better burt out stages in life
.
Having children
is a big responsibility and it needs a good economic level to supply all the needs of the child that is
coming to explore, learn, and enjoy family. Some people
decide to be parents when they are young, because it is their big dream, or sometimes they do not plan it and have to become parents and all their lives turn around to their children
, postponing studies, travels, and other projects, trying to achieve the best for their baby. For instance
, Colombia is an undeveloped country with a big data of young humans, that are growing babies, since most of the time, the baby comes without a plan, and for that reason, they are obligated to rise faster without burning some stages such
as University life
, first jobs, solo travel, new investments. However
, I believe that the opportunity to have a family with children
has to be after of
achieving a stable Change preposition
apply
economic
.
The positive views of having Replace the word
economy
children
later in life
, it is known that many adventures, social interactions, travel, and individual or personal goals have been researched, the beginning of the 30s can be an opportunity to start with another stage, such
as family experience, since in that moment, most of the time, people
have been finished with a professional career and have built financial support and probably have a specific proposes or think that they want or not in their life
. For example
, The US is a country with a big data analysis, which shows that Americans start to create a family after they are 32 years old, buying their first house around 35's,
when they get married and ready to get Remove the comma
apply
children
since they argue in some interviews that is
the right moment to face new challenges as human
being.
In conclusion, getting Add an article
a human
children
when the person is young can be an option for a person who wish
to do that, maybe is not the best plan for Change the verb form
wishes
people
which is no planning with time, however
, I support the idea of having children
later in life
, because it when people
had already face a lot of different experiences and probably they are ready to create a family.Submitted by jennitobon16 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...