Task 2: Nowadays, more and more women decide to have children later in their life? why? Does the advantage or disadvantage?

In modernity, women prefer to have

children

when they feel more like adults and when they are explored and built a good economy.

Although

making the decision to have

children

in the early 20's is not the end of the world, I believe the drawbacks outweigh the advantages, because it is better burt out stages in

life

. Having

children

is a big responsibility and it needs a good economic level to supply all the needs of the child

that is

coming to explore, learn, and enjoy family. Some

people

decide to be parents when they are young, because it is their big dream, or sometimes they do not plan it and have to become parents and all their lives turn around to their

children

, postponing studies, travels, and other projects, trying to achieve the best for their baby.

For instance

, Colombia is an undeveloped country with a big data of young humans, that are growing babies, since most of the time, the baby comes without a plan, and for that reason, they are obligated to rise faster without burning some stages

such

as University

life

, first jobs, solo travel, new investments.

However

, I believe that the opportunity to have a family with

children

has to be after

of

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achieving a stable

economic

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. The positive views of having

children

later in

life

, it is known that many adventures, social interactions, travel, and individual or personal goals have been researched, the beginning of the 30s can be an opportunity to start with another stage,

such

as family experience, since in that moment, most of the time,

people

have been finished with a professional career and have built financial support and probably have a specific proposes or think that they want or not in their

life

.

For example

, The US is a country with a big data analysis, which shows that Americans start to create a family after they are 32 years old, buying their first house around 35's

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when they get married and ready to get

children

since they argue in some interviews

that is

the right moment to face new challenges as

human

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being. In conclusion, getting

children

when the person is young can be an option for a person who

wish

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to do that, maybe is not the best plan for

people

which is no planning with time,

however

, I support the idea of having

children

later in

life

, because it when

people

had already face a lot of different experiences and probably they are ready to create a family.