Countries spends large amount of money on sports competions.Do you think the advantades outweight the disadvantages.

Nowadays, the euphoria of

sports

competitions has

been

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increased.

However

,

this

affect

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the

countries

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expenditure as they need

enormous

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amount of money to realize these events.

While

it is important for them to fund

sports

events, I believe it should only be assisted up to a point, because there needs to be enough money to aid other public sectors. One of the main advantages of grasp

sports

games is the

high-exposure

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to the countries.

This

is because these activities are joined by other athletes from nations across the world,

consequently

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people

attract

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to watch the games and support their own representative teams.

For example

, when the World Cup was held in Qatar, the income of the nation rose significantly as visitors

were interest

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to explore

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it.

Hence

,

this

is one of the impactful ways to promote not only the players but

also

the states.

On the other hand

,

this

phenomenon does

has

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drawbacks in terms of money. The competitions required considerable attention from the government which

causes

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lack

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of attention to other aspects.

For instance

,

while

Jakarta was

focus

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on preparing

an

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for an

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F1 race, houses and

buldings

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buildings

were drowned because of

flood

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and it shows how the government did not provide enough endowment for

this

area.

Furthermore

, not every society groups feel impacted, they often feel a lot of stress

instead

. To illustrate

this

, when a city on a preparation to

the

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glamorous event, the underprivilege community only experience

the

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inconvenience

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such

as

,

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road

closure

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and traffic

jam

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.

As a result

, the exposure is not directly beneficial for them. In conclusion, despite the advantage of advertising countries through

nation

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sports

competitions, we must take into consideration the disadvantages that

witnessed

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by

lower

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social community which need enough attention from the government.

Therefore

, in my

opinion

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the cons

are

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outweight

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outweigh

outweighed

the positive impacts.