The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first image depicts the components of a fish pie,
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the second chart delineates the stages and equipment involved in the operation of producing frozen fish pies in a factory.
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Overall
, it is conspicuous that the procedure includes multiple steps, starting from delivering ingredients to the manufacturer and ending with dispatching the final products to different regions.
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Initially
, the harvested Linking Words
potatoes
and fresh Use synonyms
salmon
are transferred to the producer. Use synonyms
In particular
, the process of delivering Linking Words
potatoes
takes over one month, Use synonyms
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salmon
transferring operation takes half a day or less. The following step begins when the Use synonyms
potatoes
are cleaned, and peeled. At the same time, the fresh Use synonyms
salmon
is marinated with lemon and salt. Use synonyms
Then
, the clear Linking Words
potatoes
are sliced before being boiled. On the other side, the marinated Use synonyms
salmon
is steamed in an oven. Use synonyms
After
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this
stage, a special group will remove the skin and bones. Linking Words
In addition
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this
step is inspected by a supervisor.
The next level commences when the boiled Linking Words
potatoes
are chilled. Use synonyms
Then
they are stored before dumping into a potato filter. At the same timescale, they are mixed with a mixture of peas and sauce that were prepared before. Linking Words
Next,
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this
mixture is contained in various boxes and wrapped simultaneously. Eventually, packed boxes are frozen in low temperatures. Once the freezing technique is done, the final frozen fish pies are stored in big carton boxes.Linking Words
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