he bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The graph gives information about the
illiteracy
rates
in the world based on regional and gender during the previous year. Overall
, the illiteracy
rate for females is the highest for each country, especially in South Asia
. And for male has the lowest point compared to all countries
.
Looking at the details, the rates
of female Fix the agreement mistake
rate
illiteracy
in their areas is just under 30% (developed countries
approximately 3%, latin american 3% and east asia
20%). Change the capitalization
Asia
Then
, the countries
with the highest rates
for
the uneducated female are more than 40%. It was sub-Saharan around 48%, Arab states Change preposition
of
53
% and the South Change preposition
at 53
asia
Change the capitalization
Asia
58
% which is the highest amount.
Change preposition
at 58
On the other hand
, the male group in developed countries
has 2
% respectively Correct article usage
a 2
illiteracy
rates
and it increased in other Fix the agreement mistake
rate
countries
, Latin American
Replace the word
America
10
% and East Change preposition
at 10
Asia
approximately
8%. Change preposition
at approximately
Furthermore
, the three countries
have a slight proportion (sub sasaran
31%, arab states 29% and South Correct your spelling
Saharan
asia
35%.Change the capitalization
Asia
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