the diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

the diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured
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The flow chart illustrates the process of manufacturing one
types
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of convenience food which is called instant
noodles
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
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process includes 8 stages from adding
flours
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flour
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, making
dough
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, and cooking to storage silos to
labeling
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labelling
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and sealing. At the first step of
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process, flours that transforming by a truck lead into storage silos.
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, the ingredients with water and oil are mixed by a mixer to make a
dough
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. At the following stage, the
dough
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is passed through rollers to be formed as sheets. After that, the
dough
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sheets are converted to
dough
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stripes. In the fifth phase,
noodles
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are put on
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noodles
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noodle
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discs to be cooked and dried by an automatic machine. On the packaging side, these cooked
noodles
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are put in cups
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,
vegetables
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and spices are added to them to make them tasty.
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, designed labels are glued on cups and sealed to distribute in markets.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles, dough with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • mixing ingredients
  • dough preparation
  • sheeting
  • steaming
  • cutting techniques
  • dehydration
  • deep-frying
  • cooling system
  • packaging
  • quality control
  • production line
  • mass production
  • food preservation
  • convenience food
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