The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how
plastic
bottles are recycled through nine main steps.
Firstly
,
public
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the public
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will throw their
waste
into different rubbish bins. The rubbish collector trucks will
then
collect all the
waste
to be sent to the recycling centre. In the recycling centre, all the
waste
are being
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sorted and categorised. Those
materials
which are suitable for recycling will be compressed into blocks,
whereas
those unsuitable
waste
will be eliminated.
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the fifth step, the compressed blocks will be crushed by the machine and the remaining pieces will fall directly into
water
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tank for washing. After that, the subsequent step is to produce
plastic
pellets and
to
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heat the pellets up to form raw
materials
. When the raw
materials
are ready, they will be packed and sent to different processing centres. These raw
materials
will
then
be produced into the final products
such
as containers, T-shirts,
plastic
bags and pencils.
Overall
, it
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involves
involved
nine main steps to recycle
plastic
bottles from
waste
into the final products.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, waste, materials with synonyms.
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