The charts below show the percentage of electricity consumed by different sectors in Eastern Australia in 2007 and 2010.
The given pie chart presents the proportion of the usage of electricity by 8 distinct sectors in Eastern
Autralia
in 2007 and 2010. The data are measured by percentages.
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Australia
Overall
, it can be seen that most people tend to use electricity for residental
and commercial both in 2007 and 2010. The rest of the sectors are from 6 different categories, namely agriculture, mining, Correct your spelling
residential
alumunium
, Correct your spelling
aluminium
manfuacturing
, transport, and other metals.
In 2007, Residential held the most Correct your spelling
manufacturing
user
at Fix the agreement mistake
users
an
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apply
exact
28%, it still remained the same until 2010. Change the word
exactly
Likewise
, commercial, agriculture, mining, and transport had the same trend, it remained unchanged from 2007 to 2010, with 23%, 1%, 9%, 1
%, respectively.
Correct word choice
and 1
In contrast
, the other sectors, such
as alumunium
, manufacturing, and other metals had different Correct your spelling
aluminium
trend
, either increasing or decreasing. For Fix the agreement mistake
trends
alumunium
and manufacturing, the users Correct your spelling
aluminium
deacrase
its usage from 13%, respectively in 2007, become 11% and 9%, respectively in 2010. Correct your spelling
decrease
decreased
Whereas
other metals increased its
usage of electricity from 12% in 2007 to 18% in 2010.Correct pronoun usage
their
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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