The maps show the changes of Nelson city between 2000 and now.

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The following maps illustrate the alternation of Nelson City from 2000 to the present. Looking from an

overall

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perspective, it is readily apparent that the place developed and more residential, and the most noticeable changes were a new shopping

centre

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, train station, bars, and clubs,

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the city

centre

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and university stayed in the same area over the period given.

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the figure, to the north of Nelson, there was a university with a tramline and several trees were located just next to it which are exchanged by a new shopping

centre

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nowadays.

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, in the northwest of the town, a new apartment has been constructed, and an old train station has been removed and changed by a new one which is over the city

centre

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which has added some bike rental scheme. As for remaining, a new shop

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a new covered market lies on west-south and east-south of Nelson respectively. The road is eliminated and upgraded by a new pedestrian path,

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, a restaurant, bars and clubs are built just over the port which has remained unchanged

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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

183 words

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The maps show the changes of Nelson city between 2000 and now.

It has often been suggested that the reintroduction of capital punishment would deter the ever increasing rate of serious crime. What is your view? Do you think that capital punishment should be reinstated?

Some people say History is one of the important school subjects. Other think that, in todays world subject like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. The ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own answers.

In the future, it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people in some countries. Is this positive or negative development?