Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There is an arguable discussion about the main subject at primary school,

such

as

history

or

Science

and

Technology

.

This

essay

argue

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that

science

and

technology

should be the focus

at

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academy

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the academy

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;

however

,

this

essay will still cover both sides. On the one hand,

history

takes fundamental knowledge

on

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of

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how events in the past have

build

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this

country, Indonesia, from our founding

father

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fathers

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, heroes, and even many kingdoms in the past.

Moreover

,

history

helps pupils to have value and insight

on

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into

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the meaning of struggle and fight for our independence.

Furthermore

, from

history

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history,

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student

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students

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will know about how people

life

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lived

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in the past, with very limited resources. From that story, they can learn about

development

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the development

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of tools,

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, crafting tools from stone to metal, that can enhance children’s view on resilience in life.

On the other hand

, some people might assume that

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on

science

and

technology

subjects at primary school can give more benefits

on

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the student’s future.

Technology

development today, is on the rise,

thus

,

study

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at

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in

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this

sector will lead to research and development on

science’s

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science

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jobs that will contribute to

make

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advance

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improvement

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.

For instance

, at

science

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a science

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project, each student team can explore to do several experiments that can boost their analytical thinking.

Hence

,

science

knowledge can make

student

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the student

a student

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think critically and have good

problem solving

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characteristic

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that

important

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are important

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for their future. In conclusion,

academic

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the academic

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curriculum at school can make certain subjects

as

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a priority, for

history

, children will learn about

treasure

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moments in the past that

builds

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build

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their value and

characteristic

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characteristics

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,

while

for

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apply

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the

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science

and

technology

will help them to follow massive

technology

update

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and innovation.

However

, learning about

history

is significant, but

science

will

provide

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greatly enhance

in

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pupils

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pupils'

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skills.