Some people say that the Government should break down all the historic buildings and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree?

History is a prominent subject of every

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life. But, a part of the society believes that the historical

buildings

should be

rennovated

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renovated

to

contruct

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construct

the modern business

buildings

,

while

others reject the notion.

According to

my viewpoint, history is a significant

as well as

sensitive topic so,

this

scenario is trivial. I will explicate the reasons behind

this

in upcoming paragraphs and

thus

will lead to a logical conclusion as well.

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with, the most pivotal

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to support the testimonial is, in many nations

alot

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a lot

of blood was shredded to gain freedom in yesteryears

therefore

, all

this

information is depicted from old-aged

buildings

.

For instance

, Jalian Wala Bagh located in Amritsar,

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India is a historic building and it could never be reconstructed because of its historic significance.

Furthermore

, if

government

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takes any steps to make any amendments

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this

, it might probably lead to

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religious violence in the nation.

Therefore

, it is apparent

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why many people are in favour of

this

trend.

Moreover

,

instead

of spending money on

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and

rebuilt

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of

old-culture

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, the executives can make these tourist places that could even help the country to grow economically.

Besides

, hospitals and

schools

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buildings

needs

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more attention than these historic

buildings

.

Thus

, the regime should focus on the improvement of learning and

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areas.

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analises

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analyses

analysis

,

according to

the reasons

afforementioned

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aforementioned

above one can reach

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the results that the breakdown of the ancient

buildings

might be detrimental

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the country. So, these steps should be avoided.