The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration demonstrates the process of turning
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Overall
, the process is broken down into seven steps that can be categorized into four main categories. Planting, harvesting, crushing, and processing.
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To begin
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cane is grown for around 12-18 months. After that, the second step is to harvest the Use synonyms
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cane which can be done manually by the farmers or with the help of a machine.
After the Use synonyms
sugar
canes are harvested, the farmers put it into a machine specialized to crush it in order to extract the liquid. After that, we start to process the liquid using the help of machines. In the fourth step, it is put through a limestone filter to purify the juice. From Use synonyms
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, the extracted juice is put into an evaporator over heat, to turn the liquid into syrup. It is Linking Words
then
put into a centrifuge to separate the Linking Words
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crystals from the syrup. Use synonyms
Lastly
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is dried and cooled in the seventh step.Use synonyms
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