People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than people who lived in previous times. to whta extent do you agree or disagree?
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think
that technology makes Change the verb form
thinks
people
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people's
live
easy and comfortable as Replace the word
lives
compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
past
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the past
time
.Likewise
, I also
agree with this
idea that due to
robets
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robots
people
can easily complete their work
without wasting their time
and energy.
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technological era , people
can finish their number of
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apply
work
at
one at Change preposition
apply
time
even at home and Add an article
the time
a time
work
, for example
, thesedays
most Correct your spelling
nowadays
of
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apply
the
women Correct article usage
apply
doing
washing ,cooking and mopping together as washing Wrong verb form
do
cloths
and mopping Correct your spelling
clothes
done
by machines Add a missing verb
is done
whereas
cooking done
by manual .Add a missing verb
is done
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, by
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apply
this
work
is complete
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completed
fastly
without wasting extra energy and Rephrase
quickly
time
which people
used
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use
other extra task
. Change the wording
another extra task
other extra tasks
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On
contrary
, in Correct article usage
the contrary
past
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the past
time
housewife takes Correct your spelling
the
full
day to complete all the household Add an article
a full
work
.
Not only in house
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housework
work
but also
business
and transport system
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systems
such
as people
can travel long
and short Add an article
a long
distance
with the help of bus, car and Fix the agreement mistake
distances
airplane
within few minutes or hours, Change the spelling
aeroplane
however
, in pre historical
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pre-historical
time
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times
people
takes
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take
long
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a long
time
to cove
distance . Correct your spelling
cover
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it, business
are grown
at Wrong verb form
growing
worldwide
range because Correct article usage
a worldwide
people
can share their ideas and plan
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plans
at
any country Change preposition
in
while
sitting into
their home nation, even though, Change preposition
in
people
share the
long Correct article usage
apply
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PDF
file
just within Fix the agreement mistake
files
few
seconds, like Correct article usage
a few
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Coco
global
level .
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the global
a global
although
nowadays, technology makes everyone lazy as people
are more depend
on technology ,Replace the word
dependent
nevertheless
it Add a comma
nevertheless,
also
help
to cover Change the verb form
helps
distance
,complete household Add an article
the distance
work
,expand
the Correct word choice
and expand
business
the
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apply
business
at world wide
level.Correct your spelling
worldwide
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