Across the world, local shops are closing due to losing customers to online competitors. What problems does this produce? And what solutions can you suggest to overcome them?
Nowadays, most of the local
shops
around the world are closing probably because of losing customers to online competitors. There are many Use synonyms
reasons
behind Use synonyms
this
modern Linking Words
issue
, some Use synonyms
people
think that might be because the local Use synonyms
shops
are not focusing on quality anymore, Use synonyms
while
others found that the high price of the products is the main reason. Personally, I agree with both of these two causes, Linking Words
furthermore
, I believe that Linking Words
this
is a real problem and there are many Linking Words
reasons
more than what I mentioned above. In Use synonyms
this
essay, I will shed light on some problems Linking Words
this
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issue
produces and some solutions that could overcome them.
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To begin
with, one of the Linking Words
reasons
why I believe that Use synonyms
this
is a real problem is most of the local Linking Words
shop's
products are absolutely pricey than online ones, I think that because of online Change noun form
shops'
shops
, they do not need to pay shop rent or pills. Use synonyms
for example
, in online Linking Words
shops
you can find other options cheaper than what you find in local Use synonyms
shops
, Use synonyms
also
I remember I was looking for a dress and when I found it, I could not buy it because it was very expensive and my friend told me to do searching online and I was surprised that I found the same dress with half of the price. Linking Words
Consequently
, that price is very essential point that could let the consumers look for other options. One of the solutions Linking Words
for
Linking Words
this
reason could be making offers to attract Linking Words
people
to buy from local Use synonyms
shops
.
Another reason why I agree that the closing of local Use synonyms
shops
is a big problem is that some Use synonyms
people
find shopping online is much easier than in-person shopping Use synonyms
due to
saving time for them and money as well. Linking Words
For instance
, working hours nowadays are longer than before and most Linking Words
people
especially women Use synonyms
due to
their other responsibilities, Linking Words
thus
, online shopping will be the best choice . To cover Linking Words
this
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issue
local Use synonyms
shops
might provide some extra services Use synonyms
such
as free delivery to encourage Linking Words
people
to buy from them.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
it is clear that
expensive products and less customer service are the main Linking Words
reasons
behind local Use synonyms
shops
closing. Use synonyms
Finally
, I would recommend focusing on the new kind of customer Linking Words
due to
life-changing and the increasing of responsibilities would definitely help to solve Linking Words
this
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issue
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