Nowadays both scientists and tourists can go to remote natural environments such asthe South Pole. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, with the development of modern technologies, both scientists and

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can have access to the area of wilderness.

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there are some drawbacks

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development, I personally believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. From scientists’ point of view, studies conducted in remote wilder environments help

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potential natural hazards in the future. By observing

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between various species and their habitats, botanists and zoologists can gain a deeper understanding of

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biodiversity.

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exploring and monitoring the ecosystem, any changes,

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unusual migration, could

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be used as

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of climate change or

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of hazards.

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, some natural disasters may be warned and prepared in earlier

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. For

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, natural surroundings have

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in reducing pressure from work. Remote natural areas hold unique ecosystems and landscapes,

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as ice

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and polar bears

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Pole, which

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unreachable in modern cities and

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a rare / once-in-a-lifetime and unique experience.

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escaping from monotonous daily life, people can release stress and refresh their

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, which leads to better performance when they get back to work. There are,

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, negative impacts that need to be considered. Obviously, tourism creates waste and pollution to the fragile ecosystem and some of them like plastic bottles take even centuries to decompose.

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, remote natural areas bring not only beautiful views

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dangers. If

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or scientists were not well prepared for the extreme weather / meteorological conditions and cliffs, they would risk their lives.

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, with

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of local guides, these impacts can be minimized by providing professional protection and introducing natural

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rather than consumer products.

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, access to remote natural areas has both positive and negative outcomes. If both

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and scientists can be responsible for themselves and

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environment, we can ensure that the benefits are maximized

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negative impacts are subdued.