The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The chart illustrates drink habits in five
cities
in Australia that sourced
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accurate
survey. Add an article
the accurate
an accurate
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people haveCorrect your spelling
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a
different way Add a missing verb
had a
to buy
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of buying
coffee
and tea
in last
4 weeks. They can Correct article usage
the last
bought
fresh, instant or Change the verb form
buy
be bought
went
to a cafe for Wrong verb form
go
coffee
. It's depends
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It depends
to
their different Change preposition
on
cities
. These different cities
consists
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Sydney
, Melbourne ,Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. The summaries about Change preposition
of Sydney
this
buying and drinking habits of Correct determiner usage
the
coffee
and tea
will given below.
The proportion of those buying coffee
and tea
in Sydney ranged or varied between 40% and 60% in last
4 weeks. Brisbane and Correct article usage
the last
Hobart
people consider Add the possessive form
Hobart's
about
their living Change preposition
apply
cost
, so they prefer to Fix the agreement mistake
costs
bought
instant Change the verb
buy
coffee
than go to a cafe for
buy some Change preposition
to
coffee
. While
,
35% Remove the comma
apply
Brisbane
and Adelaide like to consume fresh Change preposition
of Brisbane
drink
for accompanying study or work. Fix the agreement mistake
drinks
In addition
, Melbourne is
the highest percentage who have drinking habits to buy Verb problem
has
coffee
and tea
. Moreover
, Adelaide is
the Verb problem
has
less
percentage Correct word choice
lowest
people
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of people
that
have Correct pronoun usage
who
routine
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a routine
to buy
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for buying
coffee
and tea
among four
different Correct article usage
the four
cities
. Around 60% Hobart
and Melbourne society like to experience Change preposition
of Hobart
go
to a cafe for Wrong verb form
going
coffee
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