the bar chart shows about female and male academic member staff in 2012

the bar chart shows about female and male academic member staff in 2012
Given bar chart depicts the proportion of the school performances in seven different realms between female and male genders in the year of 2012.
Overall
, it is from the graph that the largest part was in a male group in the section of engineering
while
the male part shows the lowest percentage in that section as a male group provides. Regarding
male
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males
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, the most popular faculty was engineering approximately 85% and almost 20% for females. At the same time, education staff was unpopular among males over 20%
while
the female part dominated the index by nearly 80 per cent. On the other faculty, business and science faculty are
similarly
higher by males compared with females at around 25% and 65%, respectively.
By contrast
to that, the were slight differences in arts for females and males portion at 45% and 55$.
In addition
, the medical field shows a similar proportion for both genders at about 50%
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