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The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.

The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.
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Two
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 graphs above
compared
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compare
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 the
price
 fluctuation of the airfare ticket
in
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on
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 2 routes (
Sydney
 to
Melbourne
 and
Melbourne
 to
Sydney
). The data was
gatherd
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gathered
 within a two-
week
 observation in 2013
then
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and then
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 illustrated in the local currency of Australia.
In
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overall
,
both
flight
 routes had a similar tendency
of
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at
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 the time when the
price
raised
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rose
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 and dropped. In the first
week
,
both
 airplane ticket
price
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prices
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 dropped almost 50% from Monday to Tuesday.
Both
 ticket fees turned steady at the same
price
 of 35 AUD for 2 days for
Sydney
 to
Melbourne
,
while
 the opposite
flight
 had one more day.
Moreover
,
this
 stable trend
also
 occurred in the second
week
 on the same days. Meanwhile,
both
flight's
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flights'
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price
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prices
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 reached
its
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their
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 peak on Friday, before
it
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they
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 started to gradually fall throughout the weekend. In the second
week
, the departure from
Melbourne
 to
Sydney
 kicked off with
the
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a
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 lower
price
 compared to the departure from
Sydney
.
Besides
 the identic trend to the first
week
, during the weekend, the
price
 for
Melbourne
 to
Sydney
flight
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flights
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 remained stable. Meanwhile, the
flight
 from
Sydney
 fell to the stable fee as the
flight
 from
Melbourne
 at 50 AUD.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, sydney, melbourne, both, flight, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.
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