The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spend doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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These graphs depict the rate of possessing
of
appliances run by electricity and the amount of Change preposition
apply
time
spent for
doing Change preposition
apply
household
works
in a particular country from 1920 to 2019.
The percentage of owning different home appliances Fix the agreement mistake
work
show
an increase mostly but the Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
time
spent for
Change preposition
on
works
related Fix the agreement mistake
work
with
Change preposition
to
household
show
a gradual decline during Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
this
time
.
On the one hand, in 1920 mostly no people owned refrigerator
but it witnessed a sharp incline and Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
become
100% in 1980. Later, it didn't decrease till 2019. Wrong verb form
became
Besides
, 30% of households owned vacuum cleaners in 1920.It started increasing gradually and become
100% in 2000. The rate was Wrong verb form
became
also
100% in 2019. Additionally
, the percentage of washing machine users fluctuated slightly. It was at 40% in 1920 and stood at 70% in 1960. Next,
It faced a slight decline in 1980 and became less than 65%. Again, it startrd
to show an upward trend and stood over 70% in 2019.
Correct your spelling
started
On the other hand
, masses
spent 50 Correct article usage
the masses
hours
a week to complete household
works
in 1920. Fix the agreement mistake
work
Furthermore
, the amount of time
has been decreased continuously. People spent only 20 hours
a week in 1960 and the rate stood at 10 hours
per week in 2019 which is very
Add an article
a very
little
amount compared to the spent Correct word choice
small
hours
by people for household
works
in 1920.Fix the agreement mistake
work
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, household, works, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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