The shown Line graph below illustrates the condition of participation by club members to different courses. Summaries and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph
showing
the rate of change in popularity of three different activities in a UK Wrong verb form
shows
sports
club over a 20-year period.
Overall
, as it is shown, swimming preferences sharply decreased from 1995 to 2010, whereas
, team sports
and gym activities experienced growth through the years
analyzed. Something important to mention refers to gym activities whose participants increased the most over these years
. However
, in 2010, all sports
almost remained static with a little decrease in team sports
preferences.
Regarding swimming, the percentage of people who used to practice this
sport slightly decreased from 1995 to 2000, nonetheless
, this
fall turned sharply in the next 10 years
, from over 40% to roughly 15%, remaining stable up to 2015. On the other hand
, the gymnastic tendency had a little increase from 5% in 1995 to almost 10% in 2000. After that, it rapidly increased and reached its peak in 2010 with 28% approximately, to remain static the
next five Change preposition
for the
years
. Finally
, team sports
remained with little fluctuations over the years
between 30% and 40%, with a peak at 40% in 2010.Submitted by thuhong.68hnue on
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