The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

The current lifestyle is easier than ever in the history of humankind, fast access to vital resources, technological facilities and safety in most of the countries around the world, have made

people

more sedentary and less independent.

Hence

, I strongly consider these luxuries and amenities

prevent

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people

from developing into truly

and

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independent individuals. In

this

essay, I will emphasize my agreement

to

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with

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the aforementioned notion based on how survival skills are

being

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affected in front of a crisis.

To begin

, water and food are the vital resources of human beings for living, these were a difficult challenge for first humans on Earth.

Although

, intelligence and strong survival skills inherent to homo sapiens became the dominant species.

As a result

, most

of

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the

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humans do not hunt or cultivate seeds, the food and water comes from

the

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nature to the table or restaurant of

its

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their

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preference.

Nevertheless

,

this

simplicity implies the

lost

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loss

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of natural abilities in front of pandemics.

For instance

, the quarantine derived

of

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from

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COVID-19 in 2020

supposed

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a real challenge for humankind

due to

extreme measures of getting close among them.

Secondly

, technological facilities and safety around the world develop a "comfy and

cozy

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cosy

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" way to live and obtain information with any effort. The primitive strategies and complex problem-solving solutions used to

thrived

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throughout decades have been disappearing. To clarify, only 5% of

people

in the world think about how technologies function

instead

of

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enjoying

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enjoy

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enjoying

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them.

This

might be a problem when a war emerges.

For example

, the nation of Palestine

suffers

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suffered

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the

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attacks from Israel,

the

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only thing

people

can do is wait for a

diplomat

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diplomatic

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recession. They lost their capacity

of being

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to be

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resilient and independent.

To sum up

, I understand that global empathy and solidarity as a global benefit is better than

fight

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as monkeys. But the extreme sight of

this

could be counterproductive since

promote

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promotes

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weakening physical and mental strength and

become

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makes

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us more vulnerable.

Therefore

, I agree that our society is not strong and over-reliance individually.