Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The development of technology has been increasing in recent years, especially

about

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computer

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computers

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. Many

people

believe that

computer

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is the most beneficial invention in the

last

past

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ten decades. In

this

essay

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I strongly agree that

computer

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the computer

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is the best thing that has ever been made by

human

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humans

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.

Computer

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Computers

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can not be

disparated

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disparaged

disparate

from

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people

live

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in

modern

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era. Many

people

use it

for

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make their job become

easily

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.

For example

,

accountant

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an accountant

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uses

computer

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a computer

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to make financial planning,

to

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analyze market value, and

also

to

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make a report.

As a result

, the company will make the best business decision. By doing

this

, it

allow

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to

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increasing market share, knowing

the

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consumer behavior, and allowing them to get more and more margin. Not only for working, computers have been widely used for communicating.

People

around the globe are utilising

computer

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computers

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to make a relationship.

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, for those who

has

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never met before, because the

lenght

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light

length

was so far, they can meet in social media by using

online

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computer

.

For instance

, they can create a

facebook

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account

then

their name will be enlisted. so they can follow each other and they are able to share

a

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photo

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which can lead to be good relationship.

people

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also

can share their

experience

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experiences

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, spreading

informations

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information

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to others.

for instance

,

people

who

visits

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to

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the

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beautiful

palces

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places

can talk to their followers, and encourage them to come.

this

leads to

increasing

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number of

tourism

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. in conclusion, it can inferred that

computer

has many benefits.

People

can use it

for making

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their

job

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to be

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easy and fast, and it can be used as

communication

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a communication

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tools

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tool

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,

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so that they can show everything to

the

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people

around the world.