The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph demonstrates
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dynamic
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of
birth
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and
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rates in Switzerland in
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from 1970 to 2025. It is evident from the data that, there is a significant
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in
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birth
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rate
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for a given timeline with a length of 55 years, and it is predicted to
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continue
increasing in 2025.
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two decades witnessed a
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of
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death
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rate
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,
while
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of
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new borns
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remained similar for
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previous decade.
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birth
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the birth
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rate
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had
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for
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half a
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by 1995. In the same year was a peak
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a
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death
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rate
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, and it was 1,5
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citizens.
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a rapid
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fall
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rate
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for 400 thousand people, that number is smaller than was in 1995 and 1985, but still
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100 thousand more than in 1975. It is noticeable that
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2005 started a positive trend of
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birth
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increasing, on
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hand,
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death
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rate
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was decreasing
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. After slowly growing in
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first three
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,
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birth
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rate
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dramatically
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increased
in 2005 for one
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citizens. The
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continued in 2015 and
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to increase in 2025 and is going to reach a point of 3,2
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new borns
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, death, rate, million with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • birth rate
  • death rate
  • fluctuation
  • demographic
  • peak
  • trough
  • trend
  • incremental
  • statistical
  • longitudinal
  • population growth
  • life expectancy
  • fertility rate
  • mortality rate
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
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