The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the olympics since it began Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given
chart
and graph have data relating to participants who entered the Olympics between 1924 and 2012.
Overall
, the chart
showed that men
's percentages
were always higher than women
a lot. In 2012, both male and female participants had the highest percentages
before. The graph showed that the portion of participants rose every year.
Looking at the chart
, both male and female sections rose up. Men
's commission was more popular than women
's, that
is why the Correct pronoun usage
which
men
's chart
was clearly higher than women
's . In 1984, the female percentage had a big explosion that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
women
's percentage was higher than in many years before nearly 1000. Women
's percentages
were the same as men
's percentages
in 1952, and it was the highest of all rates.
In the graph, it shows the data that athletics was increasing more and more. In 1924, the Olympic games had 3000 athletes, but this
rose each year. But in 1984, it rocketed to nearly 11,000 people joining games and it was the year women
and men
athletics adhered to most.Submitted by [email protected] on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, men, percentages, women with synonyms.
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