The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given graph illustrates what Canadians, between the ages of 18 to 25, operated as media for watching television between 2009 and 2019.
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, it can clearly be seen that there were significant differences in each percentage of gadgets in Canada in both years.
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, flat-screen TV and conventional TV made the most distinction. In terms of the devices used in 2009, conventional TVs were the most used gadget accounting for just under 35%.
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, desktop computers, laptops, and mobile phones make similar figures, each of them constituting around one-fifth. The remaining 13% was flat-screen TV and tablet which made up 8% and 5%, respectively. Regarding the gadgets used in 2019, the percentage of conventional TVs decreased dramatically to 4%. Meanwhile, flat-screen TVs witnessed a drastic growth
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around 20%. In regard to mobile phones and tablets, the proportion drops identically by about 10%. With respect to desktop computers and laptops, the rates declined moderately to the same number.
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