The presented line graph illustrates the number of passengers travelling differents types of vehicles such as cars, trains and buses on a daily basis from 1970 to 2030.
The line graph shows the statistics of vehicles' use between 1970 and 2030. It demonstrates 3 means of transport: cars, trains and buses.
Overall
, the amount
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number
people
driving a private vehicle and trains increased significantly. In spite of this
fact, the number of those who travel by bus decreased slightly over the period.
To start with, the figure of citizens who use a car was about 5 million
people
against 2 million
of
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people
riding on trains at the beginning of the period. Until 2010 the level of train passengers grew gradually. Nevertheless
, there was a sharp rise in the next 2 decades. As to the car drivers, there was a steady upward trend with a sharp increase by 2030.
Initially
, the figure of riders by bus was 3 million
of
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people
. Over the whole period, there was a slight downward trend to 2 million
of
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people
. Moreover
, in 2015 this
led to the fact that the number of train passengers exceeded those using buses for the first time.Submitted by julykryuchkova on
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