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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts six continents around the world which
has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
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forest
area
 changes in three different years,
started
Wrong verb form
starting
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 1990, 2000, and 2005. All numbers are measured in
million
hectars
Correct your spelling
hectares
.
overall
, the widest
area
 of
forest
 is in Europe, followed by South America, Africa, North
america
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America
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, and Asia. whilst Oceania
becomes
Verb problem
has
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 the smallest
forest
area
. Only Europe
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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has an increasing number of
forrest
Correct your spelling
forest
Forrest
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
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. starting 989
million
 ha in 1990, 998
million
 ha in 2000, and
1001million
Correct your spelling
1001 million
 ha in 2005. South America and
africa
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Africa
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 were decreasing
dramitacally
Correct your spelling
dramatically
around
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to around
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 40
million
 ha in 1990 to 2000, and just under 20
million
 ha in 2005. Asia was
fluctuated
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fluctuating
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 number of
forest
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
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. decreasing about 6
millions
Change to singular
million
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 ha, but the increasing 14
million
 ha. different from the others, despite Oceania
was
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being
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 the smallest,
acording
Correct your spelling
according
 to the data,
it's
Correct your spelling
its
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forest
area
 was more
stabilize
Wrong verb form
stabilised
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 year to year
it's
Verb problem
,
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 only decreasing about 1
millions
Change to a singular noun
million
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 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, area, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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