The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table depicts six continents around the world which

has

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have

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forest

area

changes in three different years,

started

Wrong verb form

starting

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1990, 2000, and 2005. All numbers are measured in

million

hectars

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hectares

overall

, the widest

area

forest

is in Europe, followed by South America, Africa, North

america

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America

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, and Asia. whilst Oceania

becomes

Verb problem

has

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the smallest

forest

area

. Only Europe

which

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apply

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has an increasing number of

forrest

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forest

Forrest

area

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areas

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. starting 989

million

ha in 1990, 998

million

ha in 2000, and

1001million

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1001 million

ha in 2005. South America and

africa

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Africa

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were decreasing

dramitacally

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dramatically

around

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to around

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million

ha in 1990 to 2000, and just under 20

million

ha in 2005. Asia was

fluctuated

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fluctuating

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number of

forest

area

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areas

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. decreasing about 6

millions

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million

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ha, but the increasing 14

million

ha. different from the others, despite Oceania

was

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being

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the smallest,

acording

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according

to the data,

it's

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its

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forest

area

was more

stabilize

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stabilised

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year to year

it's

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only decreasing about 1

millions

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million

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respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, area, million with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

150 words

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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In many countries today children begin learning a foreign language before entering primary school. What are the reasons for this? At what age should children begin to learn a foreign language?

Write about the following topic: Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.