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This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given flow chart illustrates a series of steps involved in how
plastic
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bottles
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 are recycled.
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, the whole procedure for recycling
plastic
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bottles
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 entails a series of nine steps, starting with separating
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 bottle waste and culminating with producing new products made of
plastic
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.
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, the process requires a number of specialized machinery, including a crushing
machine
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 and a
plastic
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 pellets
machine
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. The first steps begin with people separating their
plastic
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 waste into dedicated recycled trash
box
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Then
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 the waste is picked up by truck and moved to
recycling
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the recycling
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 centre for sorting purposes, to categorise the
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bottles
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.
Next,
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in the fourth step, the selected
bottles
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 are pressed into blocks.
Subsequently
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, the blocks were crushed with a crushing
machine
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 into small pieces and washed with water. In the sixth part of the cycle, the
wased
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wasted
washed
plastic
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 is sent to
pellet
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the pellet
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machine
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 and cut into micro sizes. Afterwards, the
plastic
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 pellets are heated to form raw materials and shaped the raw materials into cubes.
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, the raw materials are ready to use for making new products,
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 as
plastic
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bottles
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, cloth, recycled
plastic
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 bags, pencils and food boxes.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles, machine with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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