You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unabled to continue doing this work. Write a letter to your manager of the organization where you have been working. describe the work you have been doing explain why you can no longer do this work * recommend another person choice interested in the work.

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Dear Sir, After greetings, I am writing

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letter to you with regard to the voluntary campaign that takes part in our neighbourhood, I was one of the participants and my mission was to collect used clothes and

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deliver them to those who are in need. Unfortunately, I can not keep working

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some personal reasons, I

have

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enrolled myself in a French course

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month.

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my tutor told me that I could start the course after ending my duties in the campaign, he called me yesterday to inform me that it is no longer possible.

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, I would like to recommend another classmate who can do

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job. he is very

interesed

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interested

in voluntary work.

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, if I

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him to participate, he would certainly agree. I will give him your phone number and all necessary details about the work. Thanks for your understanding. Yours Faithfully, John Adam.

abdoo.magicooFri Jan 26 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph serves a distinct purpose: an introduction, explanation of past work, reason for departure, the recommendation of a substitute, and a closing statement.

coherence cohesion

Link ideas between paragraphs for better flow, using cohesive devices such as 'Furthermore,' 'In addition,' and 'As a result.'

task achievement

Clarify and elaborate on the personal reasons for leaving to enhance task completion.

task achievement

Provide a proper salutation at the beginning and a more personalized closing to enhance the tone and structure of the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

152 words

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local community
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organization
charitable
public spaces
tutoring services
discontinuation
relocation
health issues
family responsibilities
recommendation
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skills
experience
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